augmentedfourth wrote:C&P'ed from that other place:
Hmm, very interesting having some of the Layan clan be Espers.
I like how Gwyn isn't quite sure about how she feels about Kara being romantically interested in her brother. If I'm remembering correctly, in your last story, Gwyn was more encouraging, but going back and forth seems normal, as it's hard to picture your sibling in that way.
The beginning of the story was very well-written - I had forgotten the summary by the time I started reading it, and I wasn't quite sure where you were going, but I definitely wanted to find out.
augmentedfourth wrote:Maybe more like "sending mixed signals" rather than encouraging.
(And I did read your last story, but it came up just as I got out of the hospital, and stringing together coherent sentences wasn't really going so well as I was getting used to typing again. )
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Black Sword wrote:augmentedfourth wrote:Maybe more like "sending mixed signals" rather than encouraging.
(And I did read your last story, but it came up just as I got out of the hospital, and stringing together coherent sentences wasn't really going so well as I was getting used to typing again. )
Since when do you string together coherent sentences? =P I kid.
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