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Alright folks, back to work. Next installment of PSIII is here! Late, but I'm counting Black Swordsman as the "on time" story.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7264050/2/Triangler

Read, review, rant and rave, ya'll know how it goes.

Black Sword wrote:EDIT: Forgotten note - I also wanted to imply why Rolf was a bit bratty as a child in his text adventure. My reasoning was his attempt to approximate someone he admired in behavior, but failing to capture the actual nuances.

I'd say he was arrogant because he was an undefeated "sword prodigy" and was coddled and favored in the orphanage and sword dojo because of that fact. Actually, it says as much in the game.

Tanith wrote:

Black Sword wrote:EDIT: Forgotten note - I also wanted to imply why Rolf was a bit bratty as a child in his text adventure. My reasoning was his attempt to approximate someone he admired in behavior, but failing to capture the actual nuances.

I'd say he was arrogant because he was an undefeated "sword prodigy" and was coddled and favored in the orphanage and sword dojo because of that fact. Actually, it says as much in the game.

Maybe I should have said another reason. =p

The last chapter of one of the most delicate and complex things I've worked on, thanks to the, ah, volatile mix here in our community.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7264050/3/Triangler

Those sweet reviews, greatly appreciated. Especially on FF.net. Reading stories in order is also appreciated. Now, off, to the doctor for another appointment!

It's a fair day in Aquatica, as Layans and Orakians trade and display in an experiment by their rulers.

A Fair Day

New story that should wrap up the Headwaters Arc, save a tale or two. Reviews appreciated. *goes back to mecha talk with carlos and Vlad*

No matter where and no matter when, children love to hear stories.
Fairy Tales of Alisa III

Basically, the warm up sets a context with an adult character and how they feel or think of something, and then goes ahead with a story that would mean something to them, written in fairy tale fashion.

The first fairy tale I wrote was "The Rose Princess." This second one is "The King and the Priestess." Each fairy tale is meant to teach its listeners as well as reveal something about the narrator, the listener, or all of the above. Reviews greatly appreciated.

The moons have returned. The master of Dahlia reawakens. The old war will begin anew.

Rancor Awakened

Ah, here we are! The Champions Arc begins! Nonstandard start, with more unanswered questions than answers, but I hope to unravel everything by the end. Helping me keep track of the questions that need answers is a huge help!

Thea, daughter of Lyle, Princess of Shusoran, has been taken captive! As her suffering grows, she offers her goddess an impossible act in exchange for a miracle.

Prayer Offering

Welp, Thea story. I was promised much Jen love when I wrote it! Though honestly, given the rough spot Thea's in....

Satera has been annihilated. In the rubble of the ruined country begins another quest. Two parts: historical piece, followed by story

Ruined Country

SO! New story, new experiment. We begin the quest with an "excerpt" from Kara's history on The Champions' War, followed by the story. This is in response to certain people who know who they are. You can skip the history to get to the story if you want (unless you run BTC), but all the information remains. Next story will have a similar approach. Review, and so on.

Read Ruined Country. Another good story, I didn't catch anything off when I read through it.

I can see this conversation happening....
*Jos Arl holds up Kara's "The Champions' War"* Hey, I read your book, but I saw a minor problem with it."

*Kara looks up from the book she's reading* "What is it, Engineer Arl?"

"It says here I left to serve the Kingdom of Landen, but I really just wanted to play with new toys. I always wanted to try my hand at machining parts for weapons- there's only so many things you can do with electronics alone, and I love a good boom!"

Alair, sister of Lune, has been taken prisoner. How will she escape? What will she do once she does?

Move Forward

There we go, another run similar to the previous. More experiments to come! Reviews appreciated, of course.

Read Move Forward. Spotted an error during my readthrough:
"There is no other way for you to leave her without getting caught."
her->here

Boldness and presumption is the order of the day at the headquarters of those who defy Lune.

Effrontery

First chapter of a two-parter! Our first POV will be with Ryan, a PSIII character who is, at best, underappreciated. Next writing experiment is in the works and will be out in a few weeks. Reviews, plz!

Part 2 is now up! Speaking of which, it feels like this arc keeps growing larger every time I think about it...

Anyway, reviews solicited!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7432817/2/Effrontery

In honor of Snorb and his birthday, one brand new Shir plushie!



Update
Even as war consumes Elysium and Landen, a different kind of battle is being waged on the far away moon of Dahlia, as Alair battles Lune with the unexpected aid of one her brother's loyalest followers.

Women's Accord

Due to a death in the family, my usual schedule will be thrown off. I apologize for the inconvenience.