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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Sun Nov 06, 2011 5:55 pm

For the secret world within the waves of the desert holds Her Treasure...

Domain of the Holy Girl

New story completed! Reviews appreciated, story topic probably exceedingly obvious.
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Sat Nov 19, 2011 11:01 pm

During the journey through Aridia to the one-time refuge of the hunted Layans of Aquatica, a doubt is sown by the demigoddess Laya in the mind of the Layan knight Ryan.

Desert Cave

New story up. Feedback appreciated.
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Mon Nov 21, 2011 5:08 am

Within Frigidia's wastes lies Laya's stronghold. Within the walls of the Castle of Silence exist questions and answers.

Castle of Silence

And I'm back on schedule. Feedback especially appreciated here, folks.
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Sun Nov 27, 2011 6:43 am

Second chapter of Castle of Silence is up!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7568797/2/Castle_of_Silence

The song at the end is a cover of Yuki Kajiura's Hepatica (KOS-MOS), which is written in the great composer's unique language. It's a rather mournful song that fits the circumstances, I feel. It's been slightly modified to fit. The cover version, sung by an original soprano, with accompanying background art and mixing. The song is available for listening on Youtube here.

Feedback is appreciated, especially comments regarding the song.
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby BenoitRen » Mon Dec 05, 2011 3:51 pm

Black Sword can't access the website at the moment, so I'm posting this for him.

Here's the latest from Black Sword, the final part of Castle of Silence! As always, he appreciates reviews and feedback.
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Mon Dec 12, 2011 4:54 am

As Mieu watches a peaceful scene in Frigidia, she is forced to ask herself a question that cannot be answered: what was Lord Orakio's intent in preserving Laya's life?

Peaceful Scene

A sort of calm before the storm chapter. Tensions will grow next installment, with an interesting experiment in the one after that. FEED ME! Er, feedback, that is!
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Mon Dec 19, 2011 11:58 pm

Landen, Aquatica, Aridia, Elysium, Frigida, all are different worlds, all have a single curtain in the background, one named Alisa III.

Backdrop

Going to be experimenting next installment, so be prepared!

Also, if all goes well, I'm about six weeks away from completing my massive PSIII total story arc!
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Tue Dec 27, 2011 3:20 am

In the final battle against Lune, the two heirs of the ancient deities must serve as sword and shield for each other.

Sword and Shield

Latest installment is now up! As you've seen, I used a pretty unconventional style for this one. Please do tell me how I did and how it feels, as I very much want to know whether the experiment is a success!
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Tue Jan 03, 2012 5:47 am

A holy girl's childhood dream. Her unknown duty, her sister's wish. An unexpected rival and a love she denied feeling. What will she do? Where will she fly? To endless dreams? Or to an uncertain future?

Maiden's Dream

Another three-parter, folks. Two more stories to go, and everything is neatly tied up and flowing into each other and my PSIII arc is complete!
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Tue Jan 10, 2012 5:26 am

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7704798/1/Maidens_Dream

Chapter 2 of 3 has been uploaded! One more chapter for this story to be wrapped up, then three more installments for the completion of my grand arc!
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby myau56 » Tue Jan 10, 2012 9:33 am

Impressive ! You are really in Phantasy Star fanfics and it's great ! For the moment I don't have much time to read your fics but I'll do soon ! Too many things to do with the Phantasy Star series but a lot of enjoyment !:)
Keep up the good work ! :clap:
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Wed Jan 11, 2012 2:36 am

Thank you! I look forward to your opinions on my work. :D
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby myau56 » Fri Jan 13, 2012 10:26 pm

Thanks ! But Like I said on another site, I'm kinda busy these days : so many things to do ! :( I'm in another Phantasy Star Fan fiction (In the Name of The Mother not to name it !;) ) and lot of work but I'll do and comment on it : I swear it ! (Like Alisa did to Nero ;) ).
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby Black Sword » Tue Jan 17, 2012 3:28 am

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7704798/3/Maidens_Dream

Last chapter uploaded! The end is nigh! Though I doubt I'll be completely done with PSIII. Gaiden I have to write...

myau56 wrote:Thanks ! But Like I said on another site, I'm kinda busy these days : so many things to do ! I'm in another Phantasy Star Fan fiction (In the Name of The Mother not to name it !;) ) and lot of work but I'll do and comment on it : I swear it ! (Like Alisa did to Nero ).


I'll keep you to that, then. :)
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Re: Phantasy Star III fanfics! (and sometimes sprites)

Postby myau56 » Tue Jan 17, 2012 10:05 pm

Yes ! And a lot of work but this is a goo thing for me ^^ Good continuation !
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