The Historian's Magic it is
Great fanfic! I told you before that PS IV is my favorite and I would claim PS III as my least favorite (note how least favorite doesn't mean dislike). It was a long time ago since I played it.
What you did elegantly was to create the setting at the opening paragraphs. Very nice. Got me engaged instantly and made me capture visually how and what was layed out. In general, I admired two main things out of the fiction:
- The way you told the backstory/history. Very nice!
- The comparison between war and love. Or the connections between them. FOr me, that was what I experienced the entire scenario. How does the art of war play upon yourself in relation to the art of love...
He was very direct and rather brutal with his kiss proposal
Love it Black Sword! I will read more of your work, keep writing...