Amwhere wrote:I read the first two chapters of Turned On. While the subject matter is... odd, your talent shines through.
It's basically a gay soap opera while progressing through the plot of the game. I dunno what I was thinking when I started it.
Amwhere wrote:I read the first two chapters of Turned On. While the subject matter is... odd, your talent shines through.
Amwhere wrote:Well, if you don't know what you were thinking, I can't even remotely take a guess.
Amwhere wrote:It works! I'm not sure how, or why, or what magic you're using here, but it works.
Anyway, enough reading your stories, and not enough writing/typing mine. After all, I know I have at least one fan.
Amwhere wrote:I sent you a PM, BW.
Amwhere wrote:I just spent an hour and a half catching up on Siren's Way. I have 3 things to say:
1) I love it and want to read more.
2) It's amazing that such different pieces can come out of the same source material. It gave me some things to think about.
3) That said, I could totally see our two sorties reconciled. However, I think variety is the spice of life here. I'll probably sneak a nod to Siren's Way in my story. I think my Miun and your Mieus could make an interesting contrast. Could we have a crossover here?
Now my brain's abuzz with ideas for my story. I hope my writing does the same for you.
(And post! Praise does move the pen, as you've said.)
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