A poem from my own mind!

[Ein Tyrion]

This is based off the characters in my novel "Flawed Victory"<p>Death Machines at his sides, one on his back<br>A wanderer who has somehow lost his tack<br>He sees only innocence and casulties<br>As he willingly slaughters his enemies<p>Blades whip on chains as he dashes through<br>mysteries unravveling, seeing what is true<br>Blood stains his path, Light bathes his eyes<br>He cannot undoe the lies, no matter how hard he tries<p>Her heart swims in purity<br>She tries to save all, Having no enemy<br>Fearful of real life, she hides in her shell<br>Beleiving in the false heaven, instead of the true Hell<p>His stare unwavering, his body stands still<br>A simple chain of kill kill kill kill<br>Blood stains his blade as he stares at the sky<br>Waiting only for the one on whose blad he will die<p>A challenge for all, a victory for none<br>When it is finally over, none have won<br>The lives lost can never be undone<br>As he falls before the setting sun<p>Each verse is a different character...<br>This is part one, it involves Ein, etra, Ella, and laranz (in that order) the final verse is a summary of stuff....kinda (cough cough ein's end)<p>part 2 will come soon<p>[size=small][Edit by Ein Tyrion on [TIME]1114725643[/TIME]][/size]

[Starlight]

You use words as an art...<p>... I loved it, Ein.

[Ein Tyrion]

Thanks i editted it a bit<p>Thank you soo much!<br>Yeah, i'm pretty good at writing and drawing, and playing the acoutsic (i'm like a muse WHEEEE) <p>Glad you liked it, i geuss you'll be one i'll have to send my novel too when its done

[Gipper]

It is an amazing piece of work...poetry in motion, pardon the pun.

[Ein Tyrion]

Hahahahaha thank you.

[Malakai]

That was really good Ein. It's nice to see the inflective side of you once in a while.

[Ein Tyrion]

Yeah i thought you all deserved it...<p>Oh yeah for those who didnt catch it "Death Machine" means guns<p>Ein's kind of like a cowboy kinda thing...Not a bounty hunter, he has the attitude of a cowboy, The guns at his sides are revolvers and on his back is a shotgun (i only described this becasue each time i read it, it sounded as if ein had death machines attached to him... ~0 )<p>[size=small][Edit by Ein Tyrion on [TIME]1114727297[/TIME]][/size]

[Etra McGarl]

Haha, it was really good Ein, *worded that wrong* The ones you did of me and the other characters of your book were really well done, although i relize mine now Yes you described me very well through that :p thanks bro<br><p>[size=small][Edit by Etra McGarl on [TIME]1114740110[/TIME]][/size]

[Siren]

Nice. Very nice, Ein. You have some skill, that's for sure...<p>:)

[LegoMuskCat]

I really like that, Ein. It sure does blow my poem about smelly socks outta the water... :p

[Ein Tyrion]

YOU KIDDIN?! i love smelly war socks!

[Etra McGarl]

I'm curious Ein, will the second string be of the other characters, or different poems on the same people? (curious :p )<p>Ps. Thanks again for doing the Etra poem, its insperational

[Ein Tyrion]

Yeah next part is four new ones<p>ANytime inpiration is always good

[LegoMuskCat]

<blockquote><i>Originally posted by Ein Tyrion</i><p>YOU KIDDIN?! i love smelly war socks!<br></blockquote><br>O_O<p>YOU UNDERSTAND MY POEM'S MEANING!!! <p>I LOVE YOU!! *hugs Ein* :p<p>Yay! Someone FINALLY figured it out... *sniffs* I'm so happy...! :p

[Gipper]

~0 ~0 <br>WAR SOCKS?!?<br>~0 ~0