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This is based off the characters in my novel "Flawed Victory"<p>Death Machines at his sides, one on his back<br>A wanderer who has somehow lost his tack<br>He sees only innocence and casulties<br>As he willingly slaughters his enemies<p>Blades whip on chains as he dashes through<br>mysteries unravveling, seeing what is true<br>Blood stains his path, Light bathes his eyes<br>He cannot undoe the lies, no matter how hard he tries<p>Her heart swims in purity<br>She tries to save all, Having no enemy<br>Fearful of real life, she hides in her shell<br>Beleiving in the false heaven, instead of the true Hell<p>His stare unwavering, his body stands still<br>A simple chain of kill kill kill kill<br>Blood stains his blade as he stares at the sky<br>Waiting only for the one on whose blad he will die<p>A challenge for all, a victory for none<br>When it is finally over, none have won<br>The lives lost can never be undone<br>As he falls before the setting sun<p>Each verse is a different character...<br>This is part one, it involves Ein, etra, Ella, and laranz (in that order) the final verse is a summary of stuff....kinda (cough cough ein's end)<p>part 2 will come soon<p>[size=small][Edit by Ein Tyrion on [TIME]1114725643[/TIME]][/size]

You use words as an art...<p>... I loved it, Ein.

Thanks i editted it a bit<p>Thank you soo much!<br>Yeah, i'm pretty good at writing and drawing, and playing the acoutsic (i'm like a muse WHEEEE) <p>Glad you liked it, i geuss you'll be one i'll have to send my novel too when its done

It is an amazing piece of work...poetry in motion, pardon the pun.

Hahahahaha thank you.

That was really good Ein. It's nice to see the inflective side of you once in a while.

Yeah i thought you all deserved it...<p>Oh yeah for those who didnt catch it "Death Machine" means guns<p>Ein's kind of like a cowboy kinda thing...Not a bounty hunter, he has the attitude of a cowboy, The guns at his sides are revolvers and on his back is a shotgun (i only described this becasue each time i read it, it sounded as if ein had death machines attached to him... ~0 )<p>[size=small][Edit by Ein Tyrion on [TIME]1114727297[/TIME]][/size]

Haha, it was really good Ein, *worded that wrong* The ones you did of me and the other characters of your book were really well done, although i relize mine now Yes you described me very well through that :p thanks bro<br><p>[size=small][Edit by Etra McGarl on [TIME]1114740110[/TIME]][/size]

Nice. Very nice, Ein. You have some skill, that's for sure...<p>:)

I really like that, Ein. It sure does blow my poem about smelly socks outta the water... :p

YOU KIDDIN?! i love smelly war socks!

I'm curious Ein, will the second string be of the other characters, or different poems on the same people? (curious :p )<p>Ps. Thanks again for doing the Etra poem, its insperational

Yeah next part is four new ones<p>ANytime inpiration is always good

<blockquote><i>Originally posted by Ein Tyrion</i><p>YOU KIDDIN?! i love smelly war socks!<br></blockquote><br>O_O<p>YOU UNDERSTAND MY POEM'S MEANING!!! <p>I LOVE YOU!! *hugs Ein* :p<p>Yay! Someone FINALLY figured it out... *sniffs* I'm so happy...! :p

~0 ~0 <br>WAR SOCKS?!?<br>~0 ~0